▶ Your Answer : The three tables graphs >> table은 표로 정리된 차트를 말합니다 illustrate information on annual expenditures of an England school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The school in 1981 spent 40% of money in total on teacher's payments, and there was a 10% an increase of 10% on it in 1991, which was 50%. However, in 2001, it went down by 5% from 50% to 45%. In 1981, The second largest figure was other employees' salaries. Its consumption (28%) was about twice as that of furniture and equipment (15%). Spending on books was the same figure as with furniture and equipment. The school spent no more than 2% money on insurance. The school in 1991 consumed 22% for other workers' salaries. Its percentage was 6% less than that in 1981. It spent a third of expenditures of furniture and equipment in 1981 (5%), and spent triple resources as that of furniture and equipment in 1991. The school consumed halved money on books, which fell down from 20% in 1991 to 9% in 2001. On the other hand, insureance for workers increased to the quadruple percentage, at 2% in 1981 to 8% in 2001.
Overall, instructors' salaries occupied the largest ratio in all the charts. However, insurance costs occupied the least ratio in the three charts.
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