▶ Your Answer : Dear philip,
Recently , I got >> get동사는 좋지 않습니다 received 가 좋을 듯 싶습니다 your letter about flooding that devastated your home town 2 weeks ago.I am sorry to hear it and feel quite sad. It was a enormous typhoon because I saw this from the BBC news. Still now, UN and many voluntary organizations are looking for sufferers by using helicopters>>가산명사이므로 복수나 단수형을 써주세요. If you are right , please come here in to my house. Moreover, sooner, I Will pick up your family members soon as well and you. Actually, I have had helping from you 2 years ago when I got injured from car accident at that time you brought to move me to hospital. >>you hbrought me to the hospital two years ago, when I had a car accident. So >> so also and but or 다섯개의 접속사는 문두에 쓸 수 없습니다, now I can pay back you by helping you any way, I will provide you rooms and all equipment in my house also food. >> Therefore, I will provide you and your family furnished rooms and food in recompense for your help. I am >> be worried about의 형태가 되어야합니다 really worried about your family members' body condition health. As a results, I will invite >> 초대한다는 의미가 강해 call이라고 쓰겠습니다 a personal doctor which >> doctor는 사람이니 who라고 받아야합니다 is the >> 최상급은 the가 필요합니다 most famous in Korea and she has good skills like >> ~와 같은이란 표현을 쓸 땐 such as 를 써주시길 바라며 여기선 on 을 써주세요 on caring ~~ caring body ,mentality and so on. I will go there Immediately and if you received this letter faster than to meet me before our meeting. Please call me by this personal number 010-33330-9090.Finally, I pray you to be safer and want to see as soon as possible.
Your best friend Jamie.
우선 전체적인 맥락이 너무 한국어를 영어로 적은 듯한 느낌을 많이 받았습니다 body condition은 health 등의 쉬운 단어로 바꿔줄 수 있으니 잘 봐주시길 바라며 personal number 등은 굳이 필요하지 않는 언급이며 어색한 표현이기도 합니다 여러 문법과 작문을 봐주시고 편지는 마지막에 답장을 바란다 혹은 Regards , Many thanks, Cheers 등의 문구를 남겨주시길 바랍니다
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