Everyone recognizes the importance of learning foreign language in this global era. Some people insist that learning a second language has to begin as early as people they can. I totally support the idea of studying foreign another language at primary school,>> 콤마 빼주세요 because younger >> 비교 대상을 언급하지 않았는데 비교급을 쓰는건 틀린 문법입니다 children have an advantage at language linguistic acquisition as well as they have much free time to focus on it.
First of all, younger children have more a chance to acquire foreign language than those who are older than them. It is because children in general start to lose their linguistic abilities as they grow up. To take my personal example, there is one of my friends named ‘Tomo’ >> 따옴표 빼주세요 who comes to >> 글쓰는 분의 위치를 모르니까 comes from ~ 라고 해야 합니다 미국으로 오다라고 한다면 moved to 라고 하는게 맞습니다 America with his family when he was at age of 7. He has 6 years elder a brother 6 years elder than him and both of them went to school. After two years, Tomo’s proficiency of English proficiency almost reached at the native level, whereas his brother’s that of speech was far under by far lower than him. Up to now, his brother is still struggling with having to have a good command skills of English.>> Tomo 란 친구가 He 인지 She 인지 모릅니다 갑자기 He 라고 하는건 좋지 않습니다
On top of that, younger children have much free time to invest on improving their fluency of foreign language skills. As students goes up to higher grades, they usually have less free time to spend on something >> 뒤에 콤마 빼주세요, because of a lot of homeworks, club activities, and so on. Learning a language is what takes tremendous time and efforts. In other words, it is not just naturally given. People have to spend enough time to truly understand truly foreign languages. Therefore, it is better to start learning when there is plenty of free time given.
In conclusion, in terms of acquiring another language skills, children has to begin as early as they can because of the following two reasons: they have limited period of time to learn foreign languages,>> 콤마 빼주세요 and they have much free time to spend, compared to those who are in higher grades.
비교급을 쓰지만 정작 비교 대상이 없습니다
많이들 하는 실수입니다
글자수 20~30 자 정도 더 줄이면 좋겠습니다
Task Achievement - 6
Coherence and Cohesion - 5
Lexical Resource - 6
Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
5.5 예상합니다