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The pie charts give information about the amount of electricity produced by fuel source different resources in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000 in 1980 and two decades after.
It is clear that in both countries the total production of electricity was increased.>> 오버뷰는 본론입니다 In Australia, there was a dramatic increase of use of using coal,>> 콤마 빼주세요 from 50 units to 130 units. In contrast, the shares of natural gas and oil were decreased from 20 and 10 to 2 and 2 from 20 to 2 and from 10 to 2 >>뒤에 콤마 빼주세요, respectively. Hydro power, which accounted for about one-fifth of production of electricity production, had the similar proportion in 2000,>> 콤마 빼주세요 with 36 out of 170.
France showed a different trend from Australia. The main difference is use of nuclear power. It was 15 out of 100 in 1980, and took slightly less than three quarters with 126 units of 180 units. Used coal use was unchanged with 25 units, while hydro power and oil were slightly changed from 5 and 20 to 2 and 25,>> 콤마 빼주세요 for each source. Natural gas, which was one of the largest fuel sources in 1980, became one of the smallest fuel sources ones in 2000,>> 콤마 빼주세요 with a change from 25 to 2.
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