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Dear madam, sir
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I am writing this latter to tell you what I am thinking about a our house tree (우리집 나무가 아닌 우리집 '옆'에 있는 나무) which has is located between our my (한국식 표현 주의!) house and boundaries. Actually, that wasn`t a big problem that located middle of our house. However, my daughters want to have a swimming pool to enjoy home vacation during free time in summer and I was consideringed where the best place to build up swimming pool is . I think that place of a tree is the best site to set the pool ! In addition , that was old problem of a tree that sometimes many bugs, insects, birds, and even frying animals coming from a tree came into my house and makeing a noisey that is a really big problem for us
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I would like to put suggest some extreme solutions that even extreme ways to solve that problem,. (comma가 아닌 full stop) I want you to cut down that tree from my house filed or just digging the garden to take off the tree. I think that second way solution might be good solution as that tree may be still alive after digging action.
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if If you disagree with my idea of have any other rebuttals, contact me as soon as possible to avoid any futher time loss . you You can reach me to my mobile phone 111-1111-1111 at any time of the day
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your fithfully
EOdam
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