It is important to be concerned about international events, even if those events have no direct impact on our lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
I agree with that it is important to be concerned about international events, even if those events have no direct impact on our lives.
First of all, it is a wise move to know about international affairs. Even though those incidents might not affect your life directly, afterall, it is likely to somehow impact you. For example, Korean citizens has nothing to do with United state’s presidential election. However, Korea should be concerned about them, because whether the next president would be hostile to North Korea, or take friendly status towards North Korea, how to impact Korean economy, and etc. What is important, is to have analyzation to make tactics, and be prepared to make the next move. In order to do so, basic concerns about international events should be made, because it would impact our lives in some ways.
Second, as we are part of this world, people should be awaken and have interests about international events. Since people are not living this world alone, what they must have is a responsibility. There are lots of incidents going on in our daily lives, the good, the bad, and because of press, global news are spread around the world at instance. For example, Australia is having a hard time these days because of the huge fire which occurred on their territory. Surprisingly, even though the fire in Australia does not affect other nations directly, people from all around the world is making donations to help people and nature of Australia. Because people are not alone, they care and help each other to make better world.
In sum, even though concerning other matters for people is a tough thing to do, they concerned about international issues, so that they could act before it could affect them, and to make this world more better place. Hence, I agree with that it is important to be concerned about international events, even if those events have no direct impact on our lives.
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