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The given charts illustrate data about the sales of coffee and bananas in the five different countries in two years ; (안 지워도 되긴 합니다. 저는 그냥 세미콜론을 없애려고 지워드린 것이고요.) 1999 and 2004
In general terms it can be clearly seen that total sales for both coffee and bananas increased significantly from 1999 to 2004. In addition, sales of bananas were earned more money than coffee.
Looking at the first chart in more detail, in 1999, coffee sales were highest in Switzerland, at 3 million euros, compared to 1.8 million euros in Denmark, 1.5 million euros in the UK, 1 million euros in Belgium and 0.8 million euros in Sweden. By 2004, the figures for coffee in all nations, Switzerland, Denmark, UK, Belgium and Sweden had grown to 6 million, 2 million, 20million, 1.7 million and 1 million euros respectively. (이렇게 일일히 나열할 필요는 없고, 그래서도 안 됩니다. 대신, 더 '분석'을 할 수 있어야 해요. 가령 2004년에는 UK의 수치가 가장 높으므로, 1999와 확연한 차이를 보이게 되죠. 이러한 사항을 반영할 수 있어야 합니다.)
Turning to the second chart more closely, in 1999, the highest amount of money generated by sales of bananas was from in Switzerland, at 15 million euros, followed by 2 million euros in Denmark, 1.8 million euros in Sweden, 1 million euros in the UK and 0.6 million euros in Belgium . By 2004, there had be an increase in the amount of money generated by banana sales in Switzerland, UK and Belgium to 47 million, 5.5 million and 4 million euros each, (여기도 마찬가지입니다. 단순히 나열하지 않아도 되고, 덜 중요한 것을 생략하셔도 좋으니까 분석을 할 수 있어야 해요. 가령 스위스 수치의 증가와 나머지의 그것은 증가폭 자체가 확연히 다릅니다. 그러한 차이를 반영해주세요~) while the figures for banana sales in Sweden and Denmark had fallen to 1 million and 0.8 million euros respectively. |
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