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The line graph illustrates that South Korea's employment changes from 1981 to 2011 as a proportion of three different fields.
Overall, it is obvious that while industry sector had consistently remained over the 30 years period, Services and Agriculture had significantly changed. In addition, the gap among three different sectors had widened between 1981 and 2011.
Looking at the line graph more closely, one can see that the rate of services workers employed was the most changeable sector all the way, which moved from just below 40% in 1981 to approximately 70% to the end of the period, with surging around 30%. Whereas, employees in the industry field was the lowest at the beginning, hitting a low at roughly 30%. In spite of rising around 5% between 1981 and 1991, it remained in decline continuously following 1991. Finally, agriculture fell down over the 30 year period, decreasing four times from 1981. (151 words)
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