The bar chart illustrates the changes of average house prices in five cities around the world compared to the price with that in 1989 in two certain periods.
It is clear that from 1990 to 2002, the average housing price of two cities out of 5 (two 로 작성해도 되고, 2로 작성해도 됩니다. 단, 하나를 골랐으면 그걸 끝까지 일관성있게 유지해주셔야 하고, 지금처럼 왔다갔다해서는 안 돼요.) decrease compared to the price in 1989
To be specific, from 1990 to 1995, the house price in New York, Tokyo and London fell 5%, 7%, 6On on the other hand, there were a slight increase in the house price, and the price of house in Madrid price went up 2% and Frankfrut, which went up 2 and 3% compared to the price in 1989. However, the trend changed significantly from 1996 to 2002, only Tokyo's house price was reported a 5% of decrease, but London's increased 11% and New York and Madrid's increased from 4 to 5%.
총평: 7/6/6/6
최근 몇 개의 글과 비교했을 때 이번에는 조금 아쉬웠네요. task 1에서는 increase/decrease 가 정말 많이 쓰일 위험이 있는데, 동의어가 정말 정말 많은 단어 중 하나이니까 이걸 잘 활용해주시는 게 좋습니다.위에서 말씀드렸듯이 overview 가 너무 길어지지 않도록 주의해주시고요. 수고하셨습니다 :)
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