아버지의 역할이 어머니의 역활만큼 강조되고 있다 당신의 의견을 쓰시오. |
it is widely accepted that as time progressed, fatherfood should be emphased as much as mother‘roll some people believe that both parents have the responsibility which brings the children up. however, others insist that since then, 'motherhood is more important than fatherfood so, when bringing up children, mother's roll should be emphased' in this essay, advantage and disadvantage of growing father' roll which is affected will be stated first and then my opinion will be mentioned there are some disadvantage of growing fatherhood. to begin with, father can easily feel tired because of incresing their rolls for example, in the past, most of father just concentrated on earning money, it was only their work. however, these society ask another extra roll such as washing the dishes, cleanning room, even raising their pet. second, it is apprarent that women is better bring children up well than men because a long times ago , mothers are responsible for bringing up according to korean newspaper articles, basiclly, motherhood has stronger than fatherfood to their children on the other hand, there are several advantage of fatherfood first, as emphasing fatherhood, many mother have another chances which work outside. that is to say, they can make money for their home. it means that not only motherhood increased more and more but also fatherfood reduces their effect in their home second, it is no doubt that there are seperating roll model in both sex for instance, if home is needed repairing tasks, men will be better than women because most of men have more experienced than women in fixing tasks third, children are received good effect in parents raising togeher, because they learn coporation to their parents . it is as impormant as any part of it in young generation. according to the survey, children who has good parents' relation have understanding ideas compare to children who has bad parents' circumstance in conclusion, there is obvious no doubt that growing fatherhood is positive effects and negative influences at home which mentioned above however, I think that fatherhood should change in modern society. because father has responsibility in order to keep their family the more father compromises their convience the better our society will overcome family problems. |