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Nowadays, these skills are useless for people. Firstly, it is because they do not have to do those things. When the clothes get become messed, they can throw it away and buy new ones. Also Moreover, they do not have to know how to repair things in the house because when that happens they can call people to help them and pay money. But However, still, there are some countries these days using those skills like such as making their own clothes and doing repairs by their own. For example, Africa, or poor countries >> 너무 짧습니다. They do not have enough money to buy clothes or call people to fix their houses. However, it is unusual people making their own clothes, not buying it. Next, people do not have to know how to repair houses because even that happens, it would be not that serious problems. In my country, people live in an apartment, so there is not much a serious problem than just houses. They can fix those problems by themselves because it is not that hard and they do not have to know or learn skills. People, in my country, most of them were disappeared, and almost no one is using the skill of making clothes by themselves. However, for repairing houses, some people are using it nowadays, too, because it is common in my country that house get problem and have to fix by them. This is also happening as the same reason as other countries those factories are getting larger and larger, so they do not have to learn. The machines are doing everything for people.
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