▶ Your Answer :
It is true that the news media is essential in contemporary society. On the one hand, some people insist that individuals cannot get any information without medium. On the other hand, the news media affect a civil to worry as to serious accidents at all times. I totally disagree with this view because information is most valuable assets in our lives and also having caution lead to decreases the rate of accidents.
To begin with, always the news channel notify important information to a civil thus people can recognize or prepare for today’s weather, changed policy and updated events, According to a survey, conducted by the Guardians, people recognize regarding changed policies of government from diverse sources. 69 percent of respondents said the channel is “mass media” and only 20 percent through “acquaintance”. Moreover from my personal experience, I tend to check news when I decide something. Especially I am used to check today’s weather through a mobile application for whether I would be needed an umbrella or not. It appears that news media is how useful and closely related with our lives.
At the same time, the awareness of accidents surrounded by one’s lives has effectiveness to have caution and protect the potential accidents, because people can learn some tips for protecting accidents from past or indirect experiences. From my point of view, after when I watched TV news about one of car accidents during summer season, I checked my car by following the reporter’s guidelines. After that I can realized some problem and finally I can save my money and lives, so I firmly believe that news includes numerous useful information.
To sum up, sometimes news channel affect to think sturdily but it has many benefits outweigh the problem. When people have attention, they can protect from acute happenings.
문법도 약하지만 무엇보다도 구성을 어떻게 해야할지 막막합니다. 조언 부탁드릴께요.
점수도 내주시면 좋구요. ^^ 감사합니다 |