▶ Your Answer : The chart illustrates the trend of consumption in different countries, which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002, and the tree types of items, provisions/cigarette, garments and leisure/learning, were divided
Turkey, one of the highest percent among the natioins in food/drinks/tobacco, was 32.14%. The next highest country was Ireland, at 28.91%. The rest of the countries, Italy, Spain and Sweden, recorded the percentage, 16.36%, 18.80% and 15.77% respecticely. Comparing to clothing/footwear, the ratio was much less than one of food/drinks/tobacco the three products. The rate of Italy was 9.00%, and the rest of them were 6.43% in Ireland, 6.5% in Spain, 5.40% in Sweden and 6.35% in Turkey. Lastly, the lowest spending was in leisure/education. Turkish people consumed money the most on their living cost in the field, 4.35%. The lowest expenditure was 1.98% in Spain. Ireland was 2.25%, and Italy and Sweden were 3.20% and 3.22% separately.
In conclusion, Turkey tended to spend the most money on their basic cost of living, including all the categories, among the nations, and all the countries expended their funds the most in food/drinks/tobacco.
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