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The bar graph and table illustrate various statistics about the percentage of Australia students with part-time job and , the average working hours and years to complete thier degree.
As seen from the chart, by the large, the number of students who had part-time job in 2003 were much more higher than in 1983. The 20-24 students group (in 1983 at around 55% and in 2003 70%) showed the greatest rate compared with other aged groups >> 가운데 - 빼주세요. Moreover, the students number in 1983 became doubled till in 2003, with the figure ranked the lowest(35%). However, in 2003, 40 group accounted for the lowest percentage.
When it comes to the table, the average working hours had a significant gap, increasing almost three times during the given period (5 hours in 1983 and 14.4 hours in 2003 per week each). On the other hand, the average years to complete degree reduced at about one year from the 5 years in 1983 to the 4 years in 2003.
In conclusion, the number of students with part-time job in 2003 was busy and worked much more than in 1983.
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