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Unprecedented population growth in the world has created many problems such as food shortage and traffic congestion. While some developed countries promote birth rate to achieve sustainable population for their nations, some developing countries regulate the population growth to avoid problems. In my opinion, controlling birth rate cannot morally and economically be justified.
In some cases, it is necessary that the government needs to control their population. In China, for example, there are excessively many people living in a major city. If the government fails to decline overpopulation >> 붙여 써주세요, the city will be crowed and cause numerous issues such as insufficiency of food and pollution created by heavy traffic. As we have seen, it is inevitable that the government needs to control the population at sustainable level by charging more taxes in accordance with the number of children >> the number of 복수명사입니다.
On the other hand, there are some arguments that regulating the number of child would cause more serious problems. In short-term the near future, it may works effectively but when it comes to next generation, there will not be enough tax payers who sustain nation’s economy. For instance, in many countries in Europe, they encourage people to have more children because these generations would pay for to>> pay for는 pay for service 등에 적합합니다 their government when they grow up. Having said that, every life on the Earth, particularly a human being, is precious and deserved to be born with freewill.
Therefore, I am convinced that the birth control should not be a decision made by governments, but people who have family. In order to make a right choice, we need to have a wide perspective on this matter.
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