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Nowadays,
the number of people who establish their own company to work alone has
increased gradually. This essay will discuss the reason and the drawbacks which
might happen in self-employment employed company.
The first reason why people decide to work solely is
that they want to escape from a (혹은 a 없이 situations) stressful situation. The atmosphere of a company
plays an important role on the performance of a worker. Under pressing pressure,
competition between co-workers is growing and the phenomenon that people
voluntarily retired and find a new job is being common. To solve this problem, people
who hope to work freely without pressure, found their own company. Moreover, by the development of developing the Internet, an one- person company can easily contact with customers using
flatform platform services. The wise use of these services flatform service, such as AMAZON, keeps (use 와 호응되니다.) people
from using traditional marketing channels and enable to sell products directly.
However, being
self-employed has many demerits compared to workers who work in an organization.
Firstly, a self-employed person might get in trouble with financial issue. For
example. The the profit is solely achieved from the outcome of his (특별한 이유가 있지 않는 한 특정 성별에 한정지어 작성해서는 안 됩니다. 밑에도 마찬가지이고요.) business activity.
If the percentage of sales dropped, he might earn much lesser than when he was in
a company. In addition, an one-person company deals with all taxation problems that
he does not have to consider before. On the other hand (앞의 내용과 반대되는 사항이 오는 것은 아니죠.), self-employed company
has little opportunity to expand its business portfolio because of the lack of
the resources such as work force or money to investment.
In conclusion, it
is true that more people try to establish their own business and this trend
will increase in the future. However, I believe that there are many
disadvantages to work alone. (여기는 총평에서 링크를 하나 넣어드리겠습니다.)
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