Your Answer ▼ The two maps depict the information about how West Park Secondary School school and other areas developed after the school was constructed constructing the school in 1950. In general, while While the main road and the school remained unchanged, various changes occurred in other places.
In 1950, a school appeared in eastern part and the main road occupied most of northern region. A few house were situated along the main road in western region. The farmland and the playground were located in southern part. (가급적이면 이 둘의 좌우/동서관계도 정확히 표현해주시는 게 좋습니다. 추후 1980년과 2010년의 지도도 기본적으로 이들의 위치를 바탕으로 작성될 것이기 때문에, 처음부터 명확하게 잡고 가는 게 좋아요.)
After passing the pass of 30 years, the school was enhanced as the main building (학교의 지위 자체가 바뀌거나 한 게 아니라, 메인 도로 밑의 모든 구역이 학교가 되었는데, 이때 school 이라고 써있는 부분이 학교의 메인 건물이 된 것으로 보시면 됩니다. 즉, 따로 main building 을 다룰 필요는 없고, 그냥 저 구역 전부가 학교에 되었다~등의 표현을 넣는 게 차라리 나아요.). Previous houses were removed and this place was divided into science block and car park. The farmland in 1950 was replaced with sports field. Meanwhile, the main road and playground kept the same location and size.
When the year was 2010, an outstanding change was seen in the car park which was expanded, reducing size of science block, playground and sports field. The sports Sport field was moved slightly west (transfer 역시 이전의 transform 과 비슷한 맥락에서, 99% 지도 문제에서는 쓸 일이 없다고 보시면 됩니다.) was transferred to west directions. Although there were a variety of changes, the main road, school and science block did not change compared in 1980.
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