The first line graph shows public transit passenger numbers between 1989 and 2009, and the second line graph shows bus and tram user numbers from 2000 to 2008 in Melbourne.
According to the first graph, it is clear that the number of public transit passengers was relatively consistent (여기에도 대략의 수치를 넣어주세요. 지금 글이 다소 짧은 편인데, 이따 총평에서 말씀드릴 Overview 의 작성 외에, 수치의 포함도 분량을 늘리는 방법이 됩니다.) between 1989 and 1994, while and an upward trend was seen over the next 10 years. Afterwards, the figure surged dramatically, reaching the highest point of about 400 million in 2009.
In the second graph, it is apparent that bus passenger numbers increased significantly and became larger than the tram's figure from 2004 to 2008, while there was no change during the first three years. Meanwhile, the number of tram passengers remained almost constant at nearly 150 million, but it went up rapidly from 2007 to 2008.
총평: (5/6/6/6) 6.0
문법이나 어휘가 화려한 건 아니지만, 그래도 최소한 이게 틀렸다라고 할 수 있는 표현은 거의 없어서, 글의 요령만 익혀주시면 크게 문제가 없을 겁니다.
Task 1에서는 유형과 관계없이 Overview 를 넣는 것이 핵심인데, overview 에서는 표의 전반적인 내용을 포괄해주시면 돼요. 자세한 건 첨부해드린 링크의 1-3번을 참고해보시면 되겠습니다. 수고하셨습니다 :)
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