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As digital technology is increasingly in use in many countries, lifestyles of workers and students are getting simpler. More complex jobs can now be done with a single one click of computer users. I believe that being open to this expansion of innovative technology will rebuild the concept of workplace and school in a better way. In this essay, I will discuss why I suggest home as a new place to work and study.
Working with computers at home can make workers maintain a work and life balance. Workers (employees 등 동의어가 정말 많습니다. work 의 경우도 labour 등이 있고요.) have a five day workday and a two day holiday. They often struggle between these two. They cannot fully unplug when they are away from the office. They have to keep checking their emails and respond to catch up their work. They will have more flexibility when they work at home and have a seven day workday and holiday.
Studying with computers at home can help students focus more on studying. Computers on the desk provides an immersive studying environment to people who need to keep focused. If students study at home, they can have their own space to study. Having this space helps them more concentrate on the contents they are learning. Computers can be the best tool for this because students do not have to move to take a class and stay at one place.
After all, people can enjoy more time with others when they get jobs done at home. People who work or study from home do not need to adjust themselves to a new environment and new (생략 가능하고, 그렇게 해주시는 게 좋습니다.) people. They can get less stressed while working or studying and can save more energy during the day. This saved energy can be used in a better place. They might be able to have a quality time with people they like because they are less stressed after a long day.
In conclusion, computers help people work and study at home. It is more convenient to live and furthermore, people can be better workers and students. Computers today are helping people over the world and their everyday life. (결론을 이렇게 작성할 경우 악센트가 집이 아닌 컴퓨터로 들어가게 됩니다. 집 쪽이 강조되도록 수정해주세요!)
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