Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
It is commonly seen that elderly are
at risk for loneliness and some heath issues so that the number of old people
who are happy and health accounted for only a few percentage relatively when compared to by contrast the past. I
will suggest some reasons and solutions about this phenomenon.
To begin with, why older people
do not feel pleasure and stay their health unlikely the past? (지금 연설을 하고 있기 때문에 의문형은 가급적이면 쓰지 않는다고 보시면 됩니다. 구어에 속하는 전형적인 표현이니까요.) First of all, the
framework of family has changed. In the past, a good number of populations formed
an extended family that live with relatives and grandparents or they built a
community village and lived with them in there. However, with the tremendous
advent of technology and urbanization, more and more people started to move from
the community to city or other region for better life. Due to this fact, a
number of older people are left alone and the people who support the elderly have decreased is
decreasing naturally.
With the reason why older people in
modern society struggle from health problem and loneliness, there are some solutions
to alleviate this trend. Of course, their families should pay more attention to
them like keep in touch reguraly and visit their home. The important thing is
that they are offered suitable conditions from their companies. In other words,
numerous companies had have to more provide vacations in order to take care employees’
old parents. Moreover, governments should give financial supports and create
some a safe and clear environment like a wellfare facility for older people who live
alone.
In conclusion, a form of extended family (form 이 아니라 반대가 아닌가요?) leads to old people’s loneliness and health problems. The issues not only their family but also a lot of companies and governments should take an actions about that. (구체적인 액션을 밝혀주세요!)
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