The given bar graph illustrates information
on the frequency of eating at number of eating fast food restaurants in the USA from 2003 to 2013.
Overall, it is clear that among the figures, the rate of once a week was dominant (여기는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.) except for 2013 over the given period.
In detail, a number of USA population 31% and 30% of people in the USA in
2003 visited some fast food restaurants once a week or once or twice a month as it was at about
31%, 30% respectively. The rate amount of several times a week recorded approximately at 16%, followed by the
percentage of a few times a year at the same time. After 3 years later, also it was were seen a similar trend. Meanwhile, there were no considerable changes, staying about from
3% to 5% in the ratio of every day or never during 10 years.
However, in 2013, the rates experienced
significant changes. The highest percentage was the ratio of once or twice a month, accounting accounted for
about 34%. Close to 39% of total by 2013 was that the second unlikely previous years. (여기는 댓글 주세요~) People in
the UK (이런 거 틀리면 안 됩니다ㅠㅠ), ate fast foods at several time a week or a few time a year,were seen to be about 15% of the total in the
final year.
총 소요시간:23분
총 글자수:192분
총평: (6/6/6/5) 6.0
dominant 의 경우 내용상의 문제인데, 이것 역시 예외적으로 꼭 숙지해주셔야합니다. (다른 내용은 진짜 절대 신경쓰지 마세요~문법이 더 중요합니다.)
많은 수험생들이 틀리는 사항인데, dominant 는 수치가 아무리 낮아도 70% 이상은 되어야 사용 가능합니다. 수치가 항목 중 제일 높다고 해서 그게 무조건 dominant 한 건 아니니까, 여기의 경우 그냥 '가장 높았다~' 라고만 작성해주셔야해요. 수고하셨습니다 :)