The illustrates give the changes what grange park have between 1920 when it opened, and today. overall, there were four flower gardens and small size of stage and fountain, and it changed to less garden, larger stage and new various public spaces.
Starting with the map of park in 1920, there were three rose gardens and one glasshouse at each side of park. Pond for water plants is placed next to rose garden which is on up-right side. Fountain was in the middle of park and two entrances were up and down side of fountain. On the left side of fountain, there was a small stage for musicians, and seats were surrounded.
Moving to the map of present, only rose garden is remained which is on up-left side. Below the garden, a stage is changed to amphitheater for concerts, and fountain is replaced to rose garden and seats were surrounded. Children’s play area is built where pond was in 1920, next to the playground, cafe was newly opened. Greenhouse is replaced by water feature and one more entrance which is the way to underground car park is on right side of waterfall.
People in these days, want to be freelancer instead of that employed by company or organization. This essay discuss what makes this situation happened, and possible drawbacks that self-employed could have.
In my opinion, being more independent have been a trend in globalized world. Especially through the media, people who are entertained and outgoing, talk about their independent life and encourage people to be an independent grownup. It does not mean being employed has only disadvantage, but media is definitely affect people and shows what merits self-employed have mostly. In my country, Korea, the most popular and role model for the young children is YouTuber. The reason why streamer such a YouTuber has more spotlight is that they could control their way to living instead of receiving order and act. People seem want to be more activism. Not only streamer, also quitting job became a trend, and the population who quit their job without specific reason rose dramatically in young generation. They, especially people who born in 90s, are perceived who don not have patient. However, that is true. Young people share how to live independently, and want to be more selfish in a good way.
It is a new generation which is not allowed in past society, hence there are a number of drawbacks that people could have. For instance, it is hard to be financially stable without their parents help. If they had an ordinary job in company, it would be the most common life which people lived so far. However, nowadays a bunch of people wants to be more challengeable and want to follow their own purpose. Obviously, being challengeable does not help to get paid. More independent life makes more competitions, only few people can survive in the ocean of tight race.
In conclusion, being freelancer is getting more popular through the trend which spread from media and society, and it is reasonable. People should recognize that doing only what they want and want to be are not the best choice, hence they must find the balance between work and life to figure out how to satisfy from their work. Being challengeable in their work at a company might be an example that could solve this problem.
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