The illustrates give the changes that Grange Park went into what grange park have between 1920 when it opened, and today. Overall overall, there were four flower gardens and small size of stage and fountain, and it changed to less garden, larger stage and new various public spaces. (여기는 문법을 떠나서, 지도 문제에서의 overview 는 개개의 사실에 대한 변화보다는 각 변화들이 어떠한 큰 그림으로 이루어지는지를 작성할 수 있어야합니다. 가령 이 지도의 경우, 시설들이 조금 더 중앙 집중화되었고, 엔터테인먼트 혹은 레크리에이션 관련 시설들이 추가되었다고 작성해주시면 되죠.)
Starting with the map of park in 1920, there were three rose gardens and one glasshouse at each side of the park. A pond Pond for water plants is placed next to a rose garden which is on up-right side. A fountain Fountain was in the middle of park and two entrances were up and down side of fountain. On the left side of the fountain, there was a small stage for musicians, and seats were surrounded. (스테이지와 의자들은 너무 떨어져있어서 surround 라는 표현을 쓰기 곤란합니다.)
Moving to the map of present, only rose garden which is on the left corner remains where it is is remained which is on up-left side. Below the garden, the stage is replaced by an a stage is changed to amphitheater for concerts, and the fountain is replaced to by a rose garden and seats were surrounded. A children's Children’s play area is built where the pond was in 1920, and next to the playground, a cafe was newly opened. The greenhouse Greenhouse is replaced by a water feature and one more entrance which is the way to underground car park is on right side of the waterfall.
총평: (6/6/6/5) 6.0
지도 문제의 overview 관련해서는 위에 말씀드린 사항을 참고해주시면 되겠습니다. Overview 에서는 항상 최대한의 큰 그림을 그릴 수 있도록 해주세요~또한 관사도 싹 붙여주시면 되겠고요. 수고하셨습니다 :)
P.S-다음부터는 Task 1/2를 따로따로 올려주시면 감사하겠습니다!
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1시간 타이머 맞추고 했습니다. 목표 점수는 6.5구요 시험은 5월달에 볼 예정입니다.
도움없이 문법, 시제, 그리고 주제에 벗어나진 않는지 신경쓰긴 했지만 이게 시험관분들에겐 어떻게 보일지 혼자 하다보니 답이 잘 안서네요.
잘 부탁드립니다!