The given pie charts demonstrate the proportion of water usage for various reason in 6 parts of the world. In overall, four nations tended to use water for agriculture, two nations used for industry.
Speaking of the Europe and the America, Europe and North America showed similar trend, the highest use was industrial at 48% and 53%, respectively. Water in both area used 39% and 32% for agriculture, and left ratios were for household at roughly 15%. South America was different to them, only 10% of water used for industry. The highest ratio was agricultural use at 71%, and 19% of water used for household.
Moving to the Asia and the Africa, those area showed the highest water usage for agriculture. All area used water for agriculture more than 80%, and Central Asia showed approximately 90%. industrial, and domestic uses were less than 20% in total, and in Central Asia, only 5% of water used for industry.
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