The three bar charts indicate the level of general happiness in Korean community by classifying age, sex and income in the years 1980 and 2012.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is clear that apart from people aged 31-40, the percentages of happiness level in other age groups went down. Then, over 32 years that of the level of happiness on males climbed compared to females who experienced a decrease (msg 조금 쳤습니다.) over 32 years. Moreover, the more earnings people generate, the higher the happiness level is.
Looking at the three bar charts more closely, one can see that a downward trend was seen in happiness level for people whose ages were between 21 and 39 and more than 40 as a proportion. In particular, the former one decreased from reaching a pinnacle at 7 out of 10 to nearly one-fifth of the total. By contrast, that of happiness level belonging to the 31-40 age group noticeably increased and then became the highest among 4 categories, with accounting for approximately 60%. In addition, the percentage of level of happiness on women was 1.5 times as high as that of men in 1980. However, the latter of which overtook the previous one in 2012 (latter 가 서로 다른 의미로 쓰여서는 곤란합니다.) the latter period. In terms of income, the gap among 4 categories had narrowed between 1980 and 2012. (on time, 209 words)
항상 감사합니다. 비밀번호는 1234입니다.
총평: (7/7/7/7) 7.0
물론 워낙에 기본기가 좋으신만큼 이정도로도 7.0은 받으실 수 있겠지만, 평소보다는 조금 아쉬웠네요. 아마 시간 때문에 마지막 문단에서 마지막 두 표는 허겁지겁 마무리하신 것 같기도 한데, 너무 특정 쪽으로만 편중되는 일이 없도록 주의해주세요! 수고하셨습니다 :)