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At this moment, obesity among children has become a severe issue in some advanced nations because of kids ingesting too much junk food. However, the problem can be dealt with educating "the seriousness of obesity" and providing healthy diets at school.
The main cause of obesity is the rise of consuming fast food like hamburger and fried chicken. These food contain detrimental ingredients such as high cholesterol and chemicals. To support this idea, beef in hamburgers usually originates from cattle that were injected antibiotics at first. Following this, this one is added artificial sodium and aspartame that provoke to become flat as well as have chronic diseases in industrial areas aiming for tasting hamburgers well. (이 문장은 살짝 꼬인 것 같은데 댓글 한번 주시거나 스스로 수정해보세요!) Thus, teenagers, who eat too much fast food, are more likely to not only gain weight but also have cardiovascular diseases or high pressure.
Even so, this problem can be addressed through education of "the damage of eating up fast food" and offering fresh diets at schools. This instruction helps adolescences recognise that fried chicken, pizza and hamburger go downhill their overall health. Aside from that, balancing vegetables, grains and meat properly on meals contributes to staying in a good shape. As a matter of fact, Jamie Oliver, who is one of famous chefs in the world, has urged the British government to change basic meals at schools in order to bring down obesity problem, so he has provided healthy food recipes (사실 현 문장처럼만 적으면 위에서 했던 말에 제이미 올리버라는 실존 인물만 붙이는 것에 지나지 않습니다. 고로 이 빨간 부분에 관련해서 조금 더 구체적으로 적을 수 있어야 해요.) to school dietitians for free.
To sum up, lots of children in wealthy countries have suffered from obesity by eating up a large amount of junk food. However, this issue can be dealt with reinforcing nutritional education and the provision of well-balanced diets at schools. (on time, 277 words)
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