<Topic> Some people
say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular
species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental
problems. Discuss
both views and give you opinion. |
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It is true to
say that endangered species is considered as one of great concerns of human beings,
however, there are some people think that we have more urgent environmental
issues than the disappearance of animals and plants. In this essay, both
viewpoints will be discussed and the reason will be suggested why I would
like to support the latter opinion. Many experts opine
that the loss of species brings a huge crisis on the Earth. One reason can be
that, it may disrupt the natural cycle. For example, if bee extinct, no insects
may carry the flower power, then plants cannot reproduce their species, subsequently,
plant-eating animals cannot feed themselves. According to the example, it is
clear that nature is relatively connected. Thus, if the cycle is interrupted,
it might give detrimental impacts on not only human extinction but also food chains.
As food chains have been evolved from the birth of the Earth, all plants, insects,
animals living in the sea and land, and mankind are related by ‘nature rule’.
Once the rule is revoked, other species may be influenced in order. It is no
doubt that there are innumerable difficulties in terms of the Earth environment, apart from animal and plant extinction. One can be that, “global warming”. Due
to the burgeoning number of cars and air travels, carbon emission and fossil
fuel issues arise as notorious human-caused issues. Since it emerges green-house
gas which the route of the unusual weather phenomenon such as drought, floods,
and abnormal temperature. It may melt glaciers and polar ice caps, consecutively,
it rises the ocean level and shrink the geological extent. The other significant
issue is the “excessive waste”. Although human-being put lots of efforts to recycle
plastics and glasses, it is generally considered that a waste problem is getting
more deteriorated. Since countless new items are produced in plastic wrappers,
which are put into a plastic bag and consumers carry it in their synthetic fabric
hand-bags. Hence, people ponder that we now live in “throwaway society”. To condense, although
endangered natural species is a massive problem that human-being encounters, I
am firmly convinced that global warming and waste problem are our priority
issues to solve urgently. |
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