The governmetn shold sometimes infringe on peopls' freedom for the security of society.
Tp what extend do you agree or disagree with this statements?
With an ever increasing concern about individual's freedom, some individuals have has opined that the government should control the freedom of people sometimes to maintain stability of soceity. I partly agree with the given opinion partly and I will present the reason why I agree with the arguement partly in this essey.
To begin with, freedom of all individuals is one of the most significant right for the public and useful measures for social security and sustainability. This is because huma Human is the only being th think and behave by their own will in the whole nature, therefore freedom is one of the most significant right for the public and useful measures for social develping. Encourging freedom of all individuals can be contributed to society by fostering the development of culture and technology and by providing people to use their creativity for society, If the general public cannot be secured their freedom, there are would not be social improvement and development but only control and obediance. WIthout Without social developments, society cannot be sustained for a long term. Therefore, it's (줄임말은 풀어써주시는 게 좋습니다.) much beneficial for countries to support the public to use their freedom in positive directions for soceity rather than preventing people from using it.
On contrary, some people would argue that government should provide people the freedom unconditionally. I believe, however, that some dangerous things like the use of guns have to be regulated by gobernment. In term of the using guns, some nations like the U.S which aloowed the public to have and use guns for theirselves, hav experienced a lot of accidents and crimes occured by the overuse and misuse of overusing and misusing guns. To maintain the security of society and protect the citiznes' lives, some regulations are needed. Moreover, instead of following the rules of society, some people who want to pursuit their own interest and profit only like thefts are also needed to be controlled and punished by government.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that freedom is one of the most important rught for everyone and govenrment should encourging encourage the public's freedom for social development. But (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다.) it should be allowed to people who obey the fundamental rules to maintain society and protect citizens.
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