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The level of serious crime is escalating alarminfly. Give some suggestions to control thes trend. |
Nowadays, in all over the world, serious crimes always occur to person. Sometimes, some criminals repeat the same crimes. Also, some criminals do unbelievable matters even if their best friends and family members. How can we reduce the serious crimes? First of all, each country legislates more powerful laws for reducing crimes. For example, some rich person have a serous guilty. However he could release, of he gave a lot of money to governments or victim. I think it is not a right thing. Through the behavior can make some thinking to person. It is people can release though he had a big guilty to other person. Besides, governments should make the law that is person who did a very terrible crime and serial crimes must open their faces and names for other person’s security. Also, we can notice the fugitive criminals. For example, if people did not recognize the criminals, they would be the next victims. Besides, fugitive criminals can make another crime when we do not recognize them. But if we can see their faces and names, we could be taking care by self. In conclusion, nowadays we live with criminals and their populations and the crimes are increasing in the world. Hence, for our lives and securities, governments must legislate the rules that opening the criminals’ faces and names and powerful laws. |