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The two diagrams show the original layout
of a public park in 1920 and changes to the layout in the present. Overall,
there have been many new facilities that people can take part in such as a children’s
play area and an amphitheater.
First of all, the most recognizable changes
occurred on (in/at 쪽이 더 적절합니다. 지도의 '종이' 자체가 기준이 되면 on 이 사용 가능하지만, 일반적으로는 부자연스러워요.) the center of the park. The fountain was (지금과 같이 현재의 지도가 비교군으로 주어져있는 경우에는, 과거시제도 되긴 하는데 현재완료쪽을 쓰는 게 더 낫습니다. 대신, 뭘 쓰든 글 내에서의 시제 통일은 꼭 해주세요!) replaced by the rose
garden which is a square shape surrounded by four chairs (의자가 네 개인 것이 아니라, seating, 즉 여러 개의 의자가 놓여있는 묶음이 네 개인 것입니다.). On the right side of
the park, there were many alterations. The rose garden and the pond for water
plants on the north have been converted into the café and children’s play area,
respectively. Also, there are new constructions on the south such as the water
feature and the entrance underground car park instead of the glasshouse and
seats.
In addition, on the left side of the park, the
stage for musicians was replaced by an the amphitheatre for concerts. There were
four seats, but now those have vanished. Two rose gardens were there which was
located in the south and the north. However, one rose garden which was placed
on the north has disappeared. |