The government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
I agree with that government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes.
First of all, on these days environmental issues are becoming very serious problems, which are widely known as Global warming, changes in weather, and etc. All those catastrophic incidents are mainly happening because of air pollutions. Vehicles emit carbon, and dioxide which contaminates the air. In china, its air is usually filled with so much smoke that you can barely see 100 meters in front of you, because of all the fumes from vehicles and factories. At least, government should impose a fee for the car owners who drive during rush hours.
Moreover, not only air pollution infects earth, but also humans as well. Lung cancer and respiratory disease have become one of the lethal illnesses which threatens human lives. If someone live in a big cities like Seoul, Beijing, or Los Angeles, and then move to a rural country side, then that person can instantly feel the clean, fresh air, where there are not many cars around. With the fortune government earned from the car owners, they should make city more habitable. It is worth collecting money, to make city more clean and healthy place to live on.
In sum, as number of cars enhancing every year, the air pollution increases, and when air gets contaminated, it is us who would be harmed. At minimum, government should regulate or collect money during rush hour. In those reasons, I agree with that government should impose a fee drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes.
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