▶ Your Answer : The chart illustrates how much water each country used in 2003. There are three categories, which are domestic usage, industrial and agricultural one.
In domestic use, the highest percentage was Australia, 63% of its all consumption. The rate was very noticeable, when it compared with five other nations, Canada, China, Turkey, Russia/India and the UK were similar ratios. They were 19% in Canada, 16% in China, 9% in Turkey, 13% in Russia/India and 22% In the UK respectively. On the other hand, Australia used the least water for industry, no more than 2%. However, the percentage of Canada was 69%, and Russia/India and U.K. were 74% and 75% separately. Seeing agriculture, there was a reliance on farming in China and Turkey. They had the same figure on agriculture, which was 73% respevtively. Australia had 35% on it, and Canada consumed 12%. Russia/India used the same percentage as its domestic one, 13%. The lowest one on agricultural use was 3% in the UK
In conclusion, Canada, Russial/India and U.K. used a lot of water on developement of industry, but China and Turkey the rest of the countries spent water for tiiling >> 어떤 단어인가요?. When it comes to domestic water, Australia consumed it the most.
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