▶ Your Answer : There are a lot of opinions on education of talented children. Some people say that the young people who have special potential have to be educated by the government. However, some people argue that it is unfair to many other youngsters who try to be the best on their fields. In my opinion, it is very important to invest money for talented children by birth. They can be raised as not only becoming a great person personally, but they can also heighten the dignity of a nation. Therefore, there are worthy of being invested. For example, Asada Mao, who is Japanese figure skating player called a genius, were recognised at her early age, and she recieved a huge amount of money from the government since childhood. Finally, she has become one of the greatest figure skating players. If she had not have any help from Japanese government, she might not be a professional athlete. On the other hand, there should not be educated for a potential child. For instance, another figure skating player from Korea, Kim Yeon A, has become a world champion breaking a world record. She did not gain any investment, but she struggled to be a pro athlete. Nobody thought she had a talent on figure skating. However, as time goes by, only harsh practice made her a jenius player. Thus, people must not judge individuals, when they are young. Their talents might be found tens of years later from the beginning it. In conclusion, finding out potential children on particular field, but people do not have to have a bias on talents. The government or corporations should give chances to develop talents equally. Every person can have the qualification of education they want. 요즘은 계속 지적받는 반복되는 문구 피할려고 노력하고, 주제 벗어나지 않으려고 노력하는데 정말 쉽지 않네요.. ㅠㅠ 단복수랑 관사, 전치사도 너무 어렵구요... 어쨌든.. 요즘 첨삭량이 장난이 아니던데.. 너무 수고하세요~~ 사회공헌하고 계세요~~ ㅎㅎ 감사합니다~~^^ |