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Dear Mr Lee
My name is John Kim, who is currently doing a second year study at the college. I am writing this letter to ask a transfer in my course.
I have studied the curriculum ‘Mechanical Engineering’ for two years, and found that I am myself not interested with in the relevant subjects. The course is full of mathematical problems and deals with machineries, which I am really terrible at. Moreover, learning materials were exciting at the first glance, but it abruptly reached to the level that I cannot keep up myself with the syllabus. Due to my wrong time managements, I have completely lost my track, and felt desperation. As this sorrowing situation becomes worse, my grade, as a result, goes down dramatically.
For such an ailing issue, I come up with the idea of changing the course for refreshing my academic life. Since I ascertain with my aptitude for chemistry, I truthfully want to study the course ‘Chemical Science’. I will have an ample motivation to do my best in a new course, if it really happens.
If I am eligible for moving to the new course, what do I need to prepare?
I look forward to hearing from you very soon,
Yours sincerely,
John kim
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