▶ Your Answer : Nowadays, rapid development of traffic enables us to enjoy life more conveniently, while this convenience has caused an excessive increase of growing traffic and air pollution. As a results, various solutions to solve handle these have been suggested. Increasing the price of petrol is one option argued by many people.
Making the price of petrol to go up higher than before could be a short-term solution to prevent from growing traffic and air pollution. Taking into consideration the fact that upper price leads to lower consumption and expensive cost of gasoline would prevent people from people spending much of petrol unlike the situation in which cheap price of it is provided. However, this simple concept is not applied to companies which contribute to majority of suggested problems. If they can earned more money using high cost of gasoline, that cost would not be considered as a problem.
To overcome this limitation, alternative energy should be considered as a main energy source. For instance, solar energy has no harm to air condition and, furthermore, it is an unlimited resource unless life of the Earth ends. In addition, complementation of public transport could be another measure to makes people use less petrol. By developing well-organized transportation system based on demography, more people who use private cars will choose to take trains or subways without loss of convenience.
In conclusion, expensive cost of petrol could be an option to inhibit people from contributing traffic and air pollution. However it is just a temporal solution. In a long term perspective, developing alternative energy and complementation of public transport service should be supported. Besides, the society need to educate people the severity caused by massive traffic.
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