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No one cannot >>deny the fact that a number of adults have full time jobs and spend almost all their time on working . There are different perspectives; some individuals insist that job satisfaction is more important rather than job security , while others insist that having a permanent job is more essential. Personally, the former is more convincing , and it will be examined below, which is going to be presented in this short written discussion.
To begin with, job satisfaction is indeed very significant for individual's wellbeing and the society. This means that, when people are satisfied with their jobs, they work harder, which brings posive effects to their society. Needless to say, nearly all people are satisfied with high salary, medical insurance,>> 세개 이상 나열에서 and 앞엔 콤마가 붙습니다 and other wellbeing systems. Especially, they want to work in a good environment and prestigious companies. In Korea, almost all kireans workers avoid dirty, dangerous, and difficult jobs, while they prefer to work in a big, famous companies such as Samsung because of high salary and good benefits of welfare. In short, job satisfaction is more important for individual's hapiness , and which will contribute to the whole society in the long run.
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