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▶ Your Answer : People have various opinions regarding
who should teach children to be successful members in our society. While some
argue that parents should teach their children to be good members, I believe
that teachers and classmates could be more suitable for children to be
successful members. This essay will discuss both views and why I believe that
school is better for children than parents.
On the one hand, it can be argued that parents
should play more crucial role in teaching children than school. This is because
parents know their children than any other people. As they know their children’s
characteristics well, they could teach exactly their children, who have various
personalities. In contrast, teachers could not perceive children’s personalities
exactly, because they have to care for so many students.
On the other hand, other people argue that teachers and classmates
are better for children to grow good members than parents. Teachers, who are educated
professionally, could give ethical lectures to children more efficiently than
parents, who are not educated professionally. In addition, taking courses with
classmates, children could learn a sensor of cooperation, which could not be
learned from home.
I believe that children could be better to be educated in school.
Although children could learn a lot from their parents, learning from parents
has the limitation. As nowadays many parents are working outside, they tend to
spend less time with their children. They do not have enough time to teach
their children. Therefore I believe that it is more efficient way to depend on
school.
In conclusion, there are
mixed opinions concerning who should educate children, but I believe that
children should more rely on school to be good members in our society. |