▶ Your Answer : 말씀하신대로 Body를 2문단으로 쓰긴 했습니다만, 3문단으로 나눌때보다 좀 더 논리적으로 써야한다는 부담감이 있습니다. 그래도 고득점(6.5이상)을 위해서는 Body를 2문단으로 써야 할까요?
People have various opinion regarding
whether high schools should provide some activities free of charge to local
people. To a certain extent, I argue that high schools do not need to have some
programs for local citizens for free, but I also believe that in some
situations, high schools should have a responsibility for local people's
education.
On
the one hand, schools do not have to be responsible for local community's
activities. This is because the main purpose of high school is not provide
various activities to local people but train pupils. In addition, local people
could use other facilities to enjoy their leisure activities. For example, they
could visit a local library to read books, or a local sport center to participate
in some sport activities. Local people should not disrupt high school students'
educational rights for their needs.
Nevertheless,
I also believe that high schools could benefit local people in some cases. If
local people reside in rural areas, they are not easy to access a library or a
theater. In such circumstances, high schools should contribute to local society
by providing some programs to local citizens for their welfare. In addition,
some events in high schools such as a festival or a plea market could be
allowed because these kinds of events usually were held on weekends or
holidays. Therefore, these events would not disturb students' educational
environment and students also could enjoy
events and relieve their stresses.
In
conclusion, there are mixed opinions regarding the high schools' roles, but I
believe that high schools do not have to provide some programs to local people
except some cases. |