▶ Your Answer :
The bar graph illustrates the percentage of
the average house prices changes in five different cities throughout the period
from 1990 to 2002 compared with the prices in 1989.
As clearly seen from the chart, there were
significant decreases by 5 percent in New York and by 7.5 percent in both Tokyo
and London at the first half of the time period. In contrast, the prices of
houses in Madrid and Frankfurt increased slightly by 2 percent and about 2.5
percent respectively. <(1989년도이 집값과 비교를 해서 그 만큼 낮거나 올랐다고 말하고 있기 때문에 이 정보도 주셔야합니다)
During the second half of the period, the
entire figures, with the exception of Tokyo, exhibited an upward trend. While
the average house prices in Tokyo dropped by 5 percent<(오히려 increase 2%입니다. 1989년도 와 비교해서 5%낮은 것이기 때문에 first half period 의 -7.5% 보다는 오른 것 입니다), the prices in New York,
Madrid, and Frankfurt rose by 5 percent, 4 percent, and 2 percent respectively.
London has the greatest increase by 12 percent compared with the prices in
1989.
According to the chart provided, the
figures showed a downward trend during the period from 1990 to 1995. Otherwise,
there was an upward trend the following years.
Score: 5 Comment: 그래프를 조금 잘 못 이해 하신 것 같습니다. 그래프의 0은 1989의 집값이라고 생각하면 됩니다. Negative가 될 수록 1989년도 집값보다는 낮은 것이고 positive이 될수록 1989년도의 집값보다 오른 것입니다. 즉, 뉴욕같은 경우는 1989년도에 비해 5%가 올랐지만 전체적은 period으로는 10%가 오른 것입니다. 그 외에는 글 쓰시는데에는 크게 문제가 없어 보입니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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