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Dear Sarah, Hello. It's I’m Lydia.<(I'm 이라고 하시면 마치 새론 만난 사람인것 처럼 들립니다) Do you remember what you
told me on last Monday? You said you were so sad that we could have not much time to seeing
Kelly. So I arranged a party for three of us. As you know, our closest friend, Kelly goes
to work as a designer in New York on the week after next. And we don’t know
when she will be back to here. So I arranged a the surprised party for her on
next Friday at 6 p.m. She has a schedule with me on that day. Her younger
sister, Anna and I set already a plan. I will meet Kelly and go do shopping because
she has to buy some stuff to bring to New York., which she wants to bring to there. While we do, Anna
will buy a cake, decorate her house and set the table with her parents. And
then I will bring Kelly to her home at 6 p.m. If you can join us, please tell me
which part you want to participate in, hanging out or helping Anna. I almost
forgot this. Her family and I will bring some food, drink or dessert. I am looking forward to reply your letter. <(글쓴이가 보내는이한테 편지를 받아서 답장을 보내고 싶으신건지 아니면 보내는 사람의 답장을 기다린다는 것인지 모르겠습니다. 전자 면은 to your letter 이라고 수정을 해주셔야하고 후자 면은 I am looking forward to your reply가 맞는 말입니다.) Sincerely, Lydia
Score: 6.5 Comment: Overall good and detailed. 주로 수정된 부분을 봐주시면 될 것 같습니다. 주로 표현이나 동사에 틀리셨습니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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