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In this recent century, we are facing an increasing massive dumping. There are several causes for the household waste issues. However, in my perspective I believe that these waste issues could be caused by the over-production and excessive packaging. This essay will discuss about the causes of different marketing strategies causing the massive wastes and discuss about the possible solutions to reduce such wastes. Despite several causes for the world having piles of wastes, the main causes could be the company's quality or quantity marketing strategies. Some companies can have a competitive advantage over having a variety of products such as Chinese goods, while other corporations may have a competitive edge on quality product such as luxurious and spacious packaging. The over-supplying or the luxurious packaging could cause massive wastes, because individuals would throwaway all unwanted or unnecessary products and packaging. <( 회사의 over production 보다는 households' over consumption 이 이유 인 것 같습니다. 회사가 over produce를 해도 이 제품들은 사람들이 구매를 하지 않는 한 house hold waste가 increase 하지 않고 그 보다는 그저 나라의/회사의 waste가 increase하게 되는 것이라고 생각합니다.) In order to solve this issue with such a waste, both the individuals and the government could tackle this issue at different levels. To tackle at the individual level, individuals can purchase the necessary products only. Purchasing necessary products can be able to restrict the company's overproduction. The government, on the other hand, could restrict with the company's packaging size and might be able to allow the company to use over packaging in the case of fragile items such as electronic goods and crystal involved goods. In conclusion, many countries are suffering from massive wastes, and this issue can be due to the company's different strategies use on the market. By stopping unnecessary packagings and individual's spending can prevent the massive dumping issues.
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