Your Answer ▼ It is true that these days, means of interpersonal active communication have changed due to the development in technology developing. This essay will discuss effects that modern technology has on the to relationship of people, and then, will address whether the change has more positive influence or drawbacks. One of the biggest change of people's connections made by of technology is availability of keeping in touch with others who are in a long distance. In the past, it was almost impossible to know what the people from other countries do daily. However, thanks to social media, it has become basic and granted part to see people's lives from long distances online. For example, I still keep in touch with my friends from America and also get to know what they do every time by referring to the posts they make they post online. It is hard to say if the technology influencing people's connection is more positive or negative, However, it is evident that people who are available of the technology has become more lazy. Becoming lazy is natural if the people don't do not (줄임말을 사용하지 말아주세요!) necessarily have go out to meet others even who live next doors. I heard that my mom (mother 쪽으로 적는 것이 훨씬 문어체에 가깝습니다.) always used to go out and play with her friends when she was young. On the other hand, when I was same age with my mom at the time, I would communicate conversate with my friends online rather than meeting face to face. Thus, there is more merit of meeting in person than keeping in touch just with the technology. In conclusion, improvement in technology has brought people the benefit of being able to get in touch with those who are in a long distance. However, all for the good parts, it is true that people has been lazy ever since they are had access to the technology, which is a more crucial flaw than the good part. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 수정한 두 번째 문단입니다 :) Although the fact that developing technology made people live comfortable, there certain is critical defection. Being more comfortable with using technology, people have become lazy. It is natural to become lazy when people do not necessitate to be active. However, being lazy makes people become reluctant to act, which means it increases the possibility of illnesses that are caused by lack of exercise. In fact, I read about one study that was found out in a university in Korea, that the rate of illnesses that's main factor is low frequency of activity grew. This phenomenon is certainly one of the negative factors of technology of nowadays.
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