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People have different ideas
about the difficulty of hobbies. Several people insist that hobbies should be
hard to enjoy. This essay will discuss why I somewhat disagree with this
argument.
Many people say that hobbies
should be difficult to be enjoyable since the low levels of them may make people lose the interests in them. They
insist that people would be more likely to be sick of hobbies, if they are
too much easy. For instance, Starcraft has been one of the most popular game
for a long time in South Korea, even though it was extremely hard to get used
to understanding all of rules due to the complex game system. This is because
people could feel a sense of achievement by overcoming the difficulties and hardships
that they had to encounter during the game play.
However, there are two reasons why all hobbies should be not difficult to enjoy. Firstly, there is little time
to learn somethings new for a number of people because they are so busy
performing their daily tasks (여기는 문장을 Firstly for a number of people~로 시작되게 한번 바꿔보세요! 충분히 영작 실력이 좋으신만큼 굳이 제가 도와드리지 않아도 되겠지만, 혹시 모르시겠으면 언제든지 댓글 주시면 도와드리겠습니다.). If it is too much hard to enjoy, many people
would give up them in a short time. In addition, the high level of hobbies
could prevent children and elderly having fun as they cannot learn hard ones.
Thus, some hobbies which can be easily taught would be necessary for people who
cannot spend much time and efforts learning them.
In conclusion, I partially
disagree with the idea that the level of hobbies have to be high. This is
because some hobbies to easily enjoy should need for several people, although
the low level of a few hobbies may deprive people of enjoyment. |