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With increasing the increase of international exchange, the number of people who living live in a foreign country where a use of a foreign language is required has been increasing you have to speak a foreign language has been increasing. I agree with this statement, however, I think the people who are immigrating to other country should respect their cultural and social practice. So so (지워진 내용은 논제에서 요구하는 바가 아닙니다.) in this essay I would like to outline about cultural and social problems which are caused by immigrants. The social problem is communication problems. If immigrants cannot speak a do not speak well foreign language as well as natives can much as native, the communication problems between native and immigrant could be occurred the former and the latter could occur. For example, when the Koreans who do can not speak English very well go to the UK to study abroad, it is hard for them It is hard for the Korean to listen to the class and make friends. Then he must he or she (특정 성별만 지칭하지 않도록 해주세요.) feel that it is so hard to adapt to the UK. Moreover, because of this another problem could be occurred. The cultural problem could be occurred (글에 상당히 많이 쓰이는 표현이므로 동의어를 한 번 정도는 꼭 활용해주셔야 합니다.) if migrants do not know about foreign cultures well. For instance, in Korea, It is manners to bow when meeting elders I meet elders. However, in the UK or the United States, they shake hands each other when they meet a person. If Korean who do not know about this bow to native. the native may feel embarrassed. (여기는 문장이 약간 꼬였는데 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) To summarize, living in a foreign country could cause many cultural social and practical problems. Thus, in my opinion migrants should study about their own culture before immigrating to reduce problems. (논제에서는 주어진 현상에 대한 제언을 하라고 요구한 바가 없습니다. 그러나 지금처럼 작성할 경우 논제를 자의적으로 해석하게 되는 것이고, 이에 따라 감점이 이루어지죠.) |