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With the development of society, more and more people have had various ideas about animals, (이문장의 경우 조금 더 구체적으로 논제와 연관지어주시면 좋을 것 같은데, 어떤 말씀인지 잘 이해를 하셨을지 모르겠네요. 단순동물이라고 하기보다는 동물 활용? 의 느낌으로 접근해주셔야 합니다. 영어로 바꿀 경우 가장 근접한 표현은 use 가되겠습니다.) and some of them assert that people do not need to use animals for their foods or products. However, I do not agree with this perspective. There is nothing more important than daily necessities which cannot be substituted, in people’s life. While some people have become a vegetarian as their belief, still many people need to get animal protein which is the main source for the human body. Children should have an animal protein-based diet in their childhood for their suitable growth, and some dietary patients are required to (여기는 동사하나가 들어가야겠죠.) a certain amount of meat regularly. Moreover, medications developed based on animal tests are essential products in individuals’ daily life. To develop medicines, experiments are required some subjects that are needed for any substitute instead of humans, so that animals are the most appropriate for humans being. (여기는 문장이 약간 꼬인 것 같은데 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) That is why still many laboratories are growing up animals as the role of experiments in this developed society. As animals have played an important role for citizens, many people who are living in abandoned areas have also had various benefits from animals. Foremost, animals would be the main source of income. People who are living in derelict places are selling animals’ meat and eggs to others or they try to exchange animals’ products to something they need in their living life. More importantly, the clothes made of animals’ skin are the warmest ones for people living in the North Pole or other cold areas, so those clothing are still must-have items. Like this, animals are clinging to people’s lives and they would be a fundamental one, even if society could be more developed. In conclusion, I think that animals are playing an indispensable role (그 양상에 대한 요약을 약간이나마해주셔야 합니다.) in people’s lives, thus people still need to use numerous products from animals. |