It has been a growing critical issue in relation to sleep in contemporary society. Some people believe that the number of sleeping hours has been reduced in contradistinction to the past decades, and it has affected detrimentally on contemporary society. The aforementioned convinces my sense of understanding in comprehensive analysis apropos the said subject that will be given a glimpse in this composition with accurate causes and present the negative influences surrounding this issue. (파란 부분은 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
The first aspect that needs to be mentioned is its (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 작성되지 않도록 주의해주세요.) causes. There are several reasons that have been the trigger for this phenomenon but the most conspicuous one is a massive desire to become successful. In other words, To become successful and to obtain popularities or material possession, individuals should keep exerting on their careers or academic achievements. Accordingly, the amount of time spent on sleep has been significantly decreased. Moreover, the advancement of existing technology in the modern era should be considered as another major factor that makes individuals sleepless. To give a scrutinized illustration, smart devices in the recent period has become one of the most prevalent objects that people use on a daily basis. Regardless of the time that they should sleep, people tend to watch some video clips or communicate with friends through electronic devices, which gives horrendous side-effects made by the-state-of-art technology. (사실 더 정확한 설명이 되기 위해서는 이 side effect 의 양상에 관한 내용이 이어저야 합니다. 그러나 현재로써도 글이 상당히 긴 편이라...더 늘리기에는 조금 무리가 있고요.)
This acclimation has brought a number of pernicious ramifications on both individuals and society. The most significant negative effect is mental diseases. To extrapolate on the basis of my fundamental knowledge, insufficient level of sleep is directly relative related to psychological illnesses such as depression, anxiety, or insomnia. Meaning to say, they tend to suffer from those deteriorations as a consequence of lack of sleep or disrupted sleeping conditions. Moreover, It reduces workers' or students' productivity. It is an irrefutable and irrevocable fact that they cannot focus on their field due to the fact that they are not given enough time to sleep. Therefore, their productivities would be decreased as a result which is has a fatal effect on individuals as well as society.
As to assess my notion, I am greatly convinced that the best configuration in this issue to resolve is to sync the general public with a proper amount of sleeping hour through the implementation of right actions or campaigns which enhance their awareness of sleeping importances.