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The bar graph describes how often Americans
consumed fast foods between 2003 and 2013 (더 정확하게 표현하자면, 2003, 2006 and 2013이라고 적는 게 맞습니다. 현재 표현은 2004년, 12년 등 모든 연도를 모조리 지칭하기 때문이죠.)
Overall, it is apparent that the frequency
of people in the United States who visited fast food restaurants (여기의 파란색이) significantly fluctuated
during the periods, whereas the figure in several categories, such as every
day, a few times a year, never (여기의 초록색을 포함시킵니다. 이게 글로써 제 의도가 전달되려나 모르겠는데, 여하튼 여기 문단은 전체가 수정이 필요해요. 저 파란색 쪽을 훨씬 더 구체화해주셔야 합니다. 혹시 무슨 말씀인지 모르시겠다면 댓글 한번 주세요!), remained relatively stable.
Looking at the bar chart more closely, it
is clear that the percentage of Americans who ate fast foods once a week and
once or twice a month outstood as over a quarter throughout the periods. It is noticeable
that more than one-thirds of people in the US visited fast food dinners in a weekly
basis in 2006, and the same figure was seen in a monthly basis criterion in
2013. Meanwhile, the percentage of Americans that consumed fast meals more than once
a week was over 15%, but that of a few times a year was under 15% during
the same spans. Finally, less than 5% of people in the United States went to
fast food restaurants every day and never in the given periods with comparatively
trivial changes. |