Your Answer ▼ In nowdays music is a vital factor unquestionably in modern society. Some people say that the music is not only a simple field ,but also it can be a way that becoming to bring together people from various between another cultures and ganeration. I strongly agree with believe this argument.
Indeed, there is that a group known as B T S , they are korean famous singer group also, the group which has enormous influence and and ripple effects that
their musci is fascinating of peolple without relationship of a race, a gender, a country and culture.thoes ripple effect make people of togerther, for instance people are saying about ther perfomence and their songs moreover, people consump a goods and music of they. (자, 지금 거의 세 줄 가까이가 하나의 문장인데, 문법이 잡혀있지 않은 상태에서 문장을 무작정 늘릴 경우 비문이 될 확률만 더 높입니다. 문장을 길게, 복잡하게 쓰실 필요가 없으니까 무조건 정확성, 간결함을 목표로 잡고 짧게짧게 끊어주세요! 지금 문장도 제가 수정해드리려고 했으나 어떤 의미를 의도하셨는지 파악하지 못해서 그냥 두었습니다.) thereby by the above things people can make a cultural combination.
Furthemore, In a general's good song is made a new-song by the next generation. (초록 문장들은 의도하신 의미에 대해서 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) It also make cooperation to each also encourages cooperation of people between defferent ages, forexample a song was popular 20 year ago, but if it is changed into a modern style, it would become popular to bring population of the younger generation also that can lead to be a bridge to connect between the diverse ages. however in order other to cooperation cooperate when it comes to music , people need to understand those of other generations it need to understand each other generation in the rappidly changing society, otherwise it can arouse a misconception that can rousing a misconception to other.
overall todays, people tend to think that music is not just a content and one of the important culture. In conclusion,the music has various powerful ability but a using to posively music need to manage from the entertainment comprise and market also,the government should encourage those culture obviously. (정부가 뭘 어떻게 해야 하는지, 즉 제언을 하는 것은 논제에서 전혀 요구된 바가 없습니다. 논제가 요구한 사항에 대해서만 충실해주셔야 합니다.)
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