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The line graph indicates that Chile's population between 1975 and 2035 divided into three different age groups.
Overall, it is evident that 15 to 64 years old group is consistently high (그 그룹 자체가 높은 것이 아니라, 그 그룹의 비율이, 혹은 수치가 높은 것입니다. 항상 주어를 정확하게 갖춰주셔야 해요.), representing over 50% steadily. On the other hand, the oldest group shows is the lowest rate, but this figure is expected to grow has been growing. Meanwhile, the middle age is the only one group which shows a significant decrease over the period. (가장 어린 그룹인데 잘못 작성하신 것 같네요.)
As can be seen in the graph, there is an only upward trend in the elderly group, expecting a doubled figure in 2035 compared to 1975. On the other hand, although the middle age group took a highest position among three groups. (여기는 '비록 ~~했지만!' 하고 문장이 끊깁니다. 불완전한 문장인 것이죠. 뒷 문장과 잇든지 해서 완전한 문장으로 만들어주셔야 해요.)) This has been plummeting from 2015, and is projected to continue to do so. Meanwhile, in 1975, (여기도 마찬가지로 주어가 정확해야 합니다.) under the 15 years old group was close behind the middle age group which was different by just more than 10%. However, (여기도 그렇고요. 그 그룹 자체가 감소하는 것이 아니라 그 그룹의 비율이 감소하는 것입니다.)the younger age group has been gradually decreasing from the first year, and the gap between this group and the middle age group is expected to become more largely, representing over 40% (파란 부분은 퍼센트포인트 붙여주셔야 합니다. 비율 수치를 뺄 때에는 무조건 붙여주세요!!) in 2035. |