The bar graph compares the volume of money which 3 different categories divided into earning expended to intake three different types of fast food every week in the UK, divided into the level of income/earning. In addition, the line chart indicates the variation in the consumption of hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizza.
It is clear that people who earn higher profit spent the dominant volume of money to eat hamburgers, The lower the given group have estate, the lower the amount of money in pizza was. In the case of fish and chips, the equal volume was expressed between high income and low income groups, but it occupied 25 pence as individual expenditure per week. (평균 정도의 수입을 보이는 계층에서 그런 현상이 드러났다~라고 적어주시면 됩니다.)
Roughly speaking, in the line graph, the consumption of hamburgers surged quickly over 20 years period compared to the original number in 1970. However, the intake of fish and chips went up and down in under 300 grams. Consequently, the figure of pizza overtook the quantity of fish and chips around 1990. (햄버거의 역전도 같이 다뤄주세요!)
총평: (5/6/7/6) 6.0
세부적인 분석 자체는 잘 되어서 overview 가 없다는 점이 더욱 아쉽네요. 그것만 있었으면 총점도 6.5 이상 충분히 가능했을 겁니다. task 1에서 제일 중요한 것이 overview 이고, 이는 표/지도/그림 유형 불문 모두에 해당되는 사항이니까 절대로 절대로 생략하지 않도록 해주세요! 수고하셨습니다 :)